Kindergarten Reading Help

kso, this is my fairytale that i ma de up , for school in in grade 8 && this is suposed to be for my reading buddy in kindergarten..
PLEASE PLEASE fix this for me, tell me how i can fix it and make it really good.. i’ll give ten points for a helpful answer ! THANKYOU SO MUCHH
Once upon a time, there was a prince named Sean and a princess named Maria who both lived in two different worlds.
The prince’s world was filled with monsters and dragons.
The princess lived in a world where it was full of nature.
They both had one thing in common,they loved to write stories.
One day, Princess Maria was sitting on her porch thinking of an idea for her new story.
Suddenly, Maria fell into a deep sleep. She dreams that she woke up in a Magical Forest and she was wandering around when she bumped into a very handsome prince named Sean, she falls in love with him.
Maria thought she was still dreaming,until the prince told her that it wasn’t a dream, and it was in fact, real.
Prince Sean and Princess Maria did not know their way out of their incomplete story. They decided to ask a character in the book for help, but which one they wondered. “ THE FRIENDLY GIANT!” they both yelled at once. “ hey, how do you know my story?”, questioned Maria. “ Your story?!?, I wrote this!”, said Sean.
They finally realized that they both wrote the same story and that’s why they were sucked in to this book.
They kept on walking until they met the Friendly Giant who said “ The only way out is if you complete this story together,before sunset”.
Maria and Sean flipped and flipped pages until it was the last page. They both thought and thought and worked together. Finally, they got it done.
They ending was” Prince Sean and Princess Maria lived happily ever after”. THE END !

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