Would You Help Me With My English Letter?
Hello, I am a self-taught English student. I would like to improve my English by learning from the mistakes I’ve made. Thank you all in advance.
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Dear Mrs. XX,
I have received an email from YJ’s PE teacher and I am really surprised.
YJ hasn’t brought her PE strip to her PE9 class 5 times so far.
I am sorry that I feel disappointed with my niece today.
Yet, my love for her won’t change.
She has made up one Friday session (Dec 11) since I talked to her.
She still has to make up 4 classes.
I will remind her of seeing you on Jan 15 and Jan 25 for her make-up PE classes.
YJ has to see Mr. Pxxx as you see his message below.
I hope that someone or you can come with her when seeing Mr. Pxx to help her communicate with him.
I’d appreciate if you could find someone for YJ.
Oh, I told YJ this morning that she has to see you today after school.
Mrs. xx..
YJ leaves her school agenda in her room for months, and I think this is not a good idea for a student like my niece.
I’ve advised her many times to bring it with her when she goes to school, but she leaves it home.
I don’t like to nag her, so I always talk to her nicely.
She seems to highly respect me; however, she sometimes forgets doing things that she has to do at home and the school, which I can’t help her.
I wish I were her mother, so I can lead her to have better and more effective life.
Mrs. xx..
I have been so much passionate about education entire my life since very young age.
I think it is not everything of studying hard in our life.
People often open their eyes to studying at different age.
However I believe that taking our responsibility is very important.
YJ is a lovely and good girl, but I hope that she takes her responsibility seriously as a student.
I never say study to her; if I do that, I probably go crazy.
I love her very much as my niece, which, I think, is the only thing that I can give her during her stay in Canada.
On the other hand, YJ has many good characters.
I have learned such good things from her.
She is very good at reading people’s mind and treating very young children.
She has thought me how to treat kids well.
She loves little children.
I think she will be an excellent kindergarten teacher in the future in Korea if she studies the field.
I gave her a chance to volunteer at a kindergarten near my home.
Christmas is in the corner.
I hope you enjoy wonderful Christmas holidays!
XX
I really don’t know what you are up to, but here it is anyway. Hope it helps.
Dear Mrs. XX,
I have received an email from YJ’s PE teacher and I am really surprised.
YJ hasn’t brought her PE strip to her PE9 class 5 times so far.
I am sorry that I feel disappointed with my niece today.
Yet, my love for her won’t change.
She has made up one Friday session (Dec 11) since I talked to her.
She still has to make up 4 classes.
I will remind her of seeing you on Jan 15 and Jan 25 for her make-up PE classes.
YJ has to see Mr. Pxxx as you see his message below.
I hope that someone or you can come with her when seeing Mr. Pxx to help her communicate with him.
I’d appreciate if you could find someone for YJ.
Oh, I told YJ this morning that she has to see you today after school.
Mrs. xx..
YJ leaves her school agenda in her room for months, and I think this is not a good idea for a student like my niece.
I’ve advised her many times to TAKE it with her when she goes to school, but she leaves it home.
I don’t like to BOTHER her, so I always talk to her nicely.
She seems to respect me HIGHLY, however, she sometimes forgets TO DO things that she HAS TO at home and AT school, which I can’t help.
I wish I were her mother, so I COULD lead her to have A better and more PRODUCTIVE life.
Mrs. xx..
I have been so much passionate about education MY entire life since very young age.
I think it is not everything of studying hard in our life.
People often open their eyes to studying at different age.
However I believe that taking responsibility is very important.
YJ is a lovely and good girl, but I hope that she takes her responsibility seriously as a student.
I never say ¿¿study?? to her; if I do that, I probably go crazy.
As my niece, I GIVE HER ALL MY LOVE, which I think,is the only thing that I can give her during her stay in Canada.
On the other hand, YJ has many good FEATURES.
I have learned MANY good things from her.
She is very good at reading people’s mind and treating very young children.
She has TAUGHT me how to treat kids well.
She loves little children.
I think she will be an excellent kindergarten teacher in the future in Korea if she studies the field.
I gave her a chance to volunteer at a kindergarten near home.
Christmas is AROUND the corner.
I hope you enjoy wonderful Christmas holidays!